The purpose of blog assignment #8 was two-fold: first, to give you some more interesting background material about the mid-century wars and their media, and second, to give you some practice reading and responding to secondary sources such as this article—for this is exactly the sort of thing you must do in your final essays. I chose this article in particular because it is very clearly written (even if you don’t know anything about sonnets and what not, you can understand the points, and the article is not filled with jargon that makes it unintelligible) and it has long been one of my favorite critical essays (and it’s not even my field!).
I thought those of you who did this assignment did a good job of picking out some arguments; working with them ranged from not-so-good to perfectly fine. So, before moving on to recapping some of the content of your posts, I want to again point you to this handout on working with quotations (the mechanics of it), and also remind you of the analytical portion of these matters: analysis must be there. To reiterate: put the quote in context, introduce the quote, explain what the quote is doing.
Many of you picked up on the minimization of the hardships of the troops. Heather said that she understood that Fenton “couldn’t get a clear shot if people didn’t stand still, but the fact that a good chunk of the people in the photos are in clean, pressed uniforms doesn’t make it seem like there’s a war going on.” Amy H. continues this thread when she says that the lack of “a war scene in the background or any other action mak[es] it seem like nothing important is going on. Of course, war is more than nothing important, but these pictures don’t show this.” Both true; continuing on to discuss the reasons for this—both working with what Houston said as well as additional information you might know (including the interplay of the print media, including the printing of Tennyson’s poem) would have been a natural continuation of this analytical line of thought.
Terry mentioned not having thought about the souvenir aspect before, and Amy J. talked about the souvenir as well. The concept of the souvenir was perhaps the most important part of this article, as this was the first time any sort of collection could really happen in a managable way. Even portrait miniatures weren’t really the same, as they were expensive and took more time than a photograph (bviously!) to produce. But think how people collect baseball cards in the 20th century: as a connection to “an experience that is by definition shared yet individually possessed” (Houston 381). What is the impulse to collect? That’s actually a question based in psychology, sociology, and anthropology, but ther are very real answers. Is it, as Kristi notes, driven from our “naturally perverse sense of curiosity”? Perhaps so.
I would also like to give a shout-out to Terry for reminding us that, 10 years later, “the pictures of the Civil War do in fact show that war is and evil place to be in, and in some instances show that soldiers do die in war.” What is the difference between the Crimean War photography and the Civil War photography, in terms of technology, purpose, use, and the overall cultural context? That’s a good question (that I just asked). Feel free to ponder it.